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WHAT IS OUR WORLD BUT A LAND OF
NEVER-ENDING DARKNESS, FOREVER SWALLOWING THE SOULS OF ITS INHABITANTS
IT IS SAID THAT ONE WHO WALKS IN THE PATH
OF THE LORD SHALL RECEIVE AND ETERNAL LIFE, YET LIFE SPENT AS A MORTAL IS HARDLY DESIRABLE

WHO IS THE RICH MAN TO CALL
HIMSELF WEALTHY, WHEN IN REALITY IT IS
ONE WHO IS NOT FOCUSED ON WEALTH, BUT LIFE'S SIMPLE PLEASURES IS TRULY HAPPY
YET EVEN ONE WHO IS RICH IS ABLE TO BE
RECONIZED IN HIS GOOD DEEDS, IF HE IS UN-TEMPTED BY HIS FORTUNE

WHY DO MEN WASTE AWAY LIFE
SEARCHING FOR ITS MEANING, WHEN IT HAS
NO MEANING AT ALL
YET AT THE SAME TIME, LIFE
HOLDS SO MANY MEANINGS THEY ARE ALL BUT
TO OBVIOUS TO BE DISCOVERED
©2008-2009 ~metallicwolverine
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Author's Comments

Yeah... first ever literature posted on this site.
Is nervous.... I hope it isn't totally crappy.
Critique is greatly welcomed, even if it's unkind. I think I can take it. =)

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:iconmetallicwolverine:
Bleh, stupid capitalization errors.
Oh wellz, I shall deal. :/

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{{ DL the Great }}
formerly known a your mom
:iconmetallicwolverine:
There, errors fixed, iz happy. 8)

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-x-x- sincerely -x-x-
{{ DL the Great }}
formerly known a your mom
:iconhippieotter:
WOW
this is really good...
all but "TOO" obvious to be discovered

spelling

its really good and sends several messages :D

ooo :iconcelticfox19: talya

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CuberAlex - my awesome blog
"Always read something that will make you look good if you die in the middle of it" - PJ O'Rourke
:iconmetallicwolverine:
Thanks... is embarrassed.
Ohhhh. *pokes fox*

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-x-x- sincerely -x-x-
{{ DL the Great }}
formerly known a your mom
:iconhippieotter:
lol

--
CuberAlex - my awesome blog
"Always read something that will make you look good if you die in the middle of it" - PJ O'Rourke

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